Peer Feedback
In our media studies class, we reviewed our film pitch with our classmates. I enjoyed this process because it is interesting to hear about suggestions from our peers that we could use to improve our film. A suggestion that stood out to me is to make a relatable character with everyday problems to allow the audience to understand our plot more. I took this feedback and implemented it into our film! In the beginning of the opening scene, the protagonist Ramona narrates her thoughts. The line "why have friends when you'll just be mistreated and replaced?" will stand out to antisocial introverts who watch our film. This line can even be relatable to people who have once surrounded themselves with bad friends!